Almost makes you feel sorry for the guy, doesn’t it?
“What could have been”
6 Comments to ““What could have been””
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Mike Sullivan
August 13, 2014 at 7:55 am -
Smeary Soapbox Press
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Smeary Soapbox Press
August 14, 2014 at 8:45 pm
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postmasterkeith
August 13, 2014 at 6:18 pm-
Smeary Soapbox Press
August 14, 2014 at 8:42 pmYeah, I agree with you about the hand in the 2nd panel. I was happy with the idea between the middle two panels talking to each other, even if the execution could use some more finesse…
Thanks for pointing out the way Watusi’s word bubble gets lost in panel 1, too. I like to use balloonless dialog from time to time, especially if two bubbles make the panel seem too cramped. But with the background, this wasn’t the best place for it, I guess…
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